In M11 we have been learning to write descriptions. We have been trying to include adjectives and similes in our writing to help create a picture in the readers mind. Today our writing task was to design an imaginary beast and describe it. We think Jack did a great job. Here is what he wrote...
The beast, slimy, scary and
three eyed slipped
three eyed slipped
along the roof tops and ate
everything in sight.
everything in sight.
People say its fangs can kill
you in one bite.
you in one bite.
His wings take flight at night.
Gone!
Gone!
We love your writing, thanks for sharing Jack.
ReplyDeletegood job best friend by tyler
ReplyDeleteWow Jack you are a fantastic writer! Cathy (Tylers Mum)
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